- M - something is missing;
- A - an article is missing;
- fragment colored in red - erroneous part.
11/19/18, 22:20 - Emilka K: Hello unce,
I have whatsapp finally.
11/20/18, 01:55 - Tomasz Księżyk: It's great. I will contact you at 15:30 today. Make sure the battery of your phone wouldn't die during our lesson. Have also your laptop handy.
11/20/18, 08:27 - Emilka K: Ok I will make sure the battery M and I will have A laptop handy.
See you soon.
11/20/18, 09:09 - Tomasz Księżyk: (1) In most cases English nouns should be preceded by an article or a pronoun. (2) There is something missing after the word "battery" in your first sentence.
Write your post again, this time without errors.
11/20/18, 14:09 - Tomasz Księżyk: I have just sent you an email message. Read it before our lesson today.
11/21/18, 16:18 - Emilka K: I was reading Your e-mail. I will do this assignment on Friday, because I have a lot of learn.
11/21/18, 16:21 - Emilka K: Uncle, can you check my e-mail, whitch I will send to you ?
11/21/18, 16:30 - Tomasz Księżyk: Sure. I will read it tonight.
11/21/18, 16:30 - Emilka K: Ok No problem
11/21/18, 16:32 - Emilka K: So I'a writting now this and next I will send this to you.
11/21/18, 17:09 - Emilka K: letter to Mark
11/21/18, 17:49 - Emilka K: Yes this assignment is for tomorrow, but now I M go on the balet and I will be in home at 20:30
11/21/18, 17:50 - Emilka K: And next I will do my homework further
11/21/18, 17:50 - Emilka K: Can you write in wathsapp my errors ?
11/21/18, 17:58 - Tomasz Księżyk: I will make an exception and do it. Make sure to look up the word "exception" in your dictionary.
I will send you my corrections over email. It would be easier for me to type this way.
11/21/18, 18:17 - Emilka K: Ok thank you so much.
11/21/18, 18:29 - Tomasz Księżyk: I have just emailed you the corrections.
11/21/18, 22:53 - Tomasz Księżyk: internship
she wears
T-shirts or plain tops
she has a good sense of humour
11/21/18, 21:28 - Emilka K: letter to Mark with corrections
11/21/18, 22:57 - Emilka K: Thank you*
11/21/18, 23:32 - Tomasz Księżyk: Try to be more careful in the future.
11/21/18, 23:51 - Emilka K: Ok I'll be more careful.
11/21/18, 23:53 - Tomasz Księżyk: You should be in bed by now.
11/21/18, 23:55 - Emilka K: I should be in bed M now but I learn yet
11/21/18, 23:56 - Tomasz Księżyk: ... but I still have to learn.
11/21/18, 23:56 - Emilka K: Ok
11/24/18, 17:39 - Tomasz Księżyk: Did you read my recent email?
11/24/18, 17:52 - Emilka K: Yes I read you email.
I made A assignment but I will sent this when I'll go back at home.
11/24/18, 17:55 - Tomasz Księżyk: Did you understand everything I had written there?
11/25/18, 00:02 - Emilka K: home work #1 part 1
11/25/18, 00:02 - Emilka K: home work #1part 2
11/25/18, 00:03 - Emilka K: This is my assignment and there are an word which I don't know.
11/28/18, 10:23 - Tomasz Księżyk: I have just mailed you the next assignment. Don't delay much with reading it.
1)... the battery in my phone...*
ReplyDelete2) ... have the laptop...
3)I read your... I have a lot learn
4)which
5)I'm writting the text* and next I will send the text* to you.
6)I'm going to ballet and I will be at home ...
7) can you correct my errors on WhatsApp*
8)I should be in bed, but I'm still learning.
9)I read your email.
10)I made the assignment... I'll go back home.
11)... there are words*
(3) a lot of learn --> a lot TO learn
ReplyDelete(5) I'a writting now this and next I will send this to you. --> I'M WRITING IT now and next I will send IT to you.
(11) there are an word --> there are THE WORDS